Wow Tarik, I liked how you read your story in a clear voice. Were you scared when you were on the rainbow?
You went sliding on a rainbow! What a great imagination you have Tarik. I wonder if you found a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
Tarik that was a great story you wrote. I liked the way you used your imagination to make it interesting. You read it in a clear voice. Well done!
I liked your story.
You read your story nice and fast.
Was it fun sliding down the rainbow, Tarik?
Yes it was fun sliding down the rainbow. I did find a pot of gold and I used it to buy some ice cream and cookies.
Is it fun sliding on the rainbow?
Did you like the slide?
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Wow Tarik, I liked how you read your story in a clear voice. Were you scared when you were on the rainbow?
You went sliding on a rainbow! What a great imagination you have Tarik. I wonder if you found a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
Tarik that was a great story you wrote. I liked the way you used your imagination to make it interesting. You read it in a clear voice. Well done!
I liked your story.
You read your story nice and fast.
Was it fun sliding down the rainbow, Tarik?
Yes it was fun sliding down the rainbow. I did find a pot of gold and I used it to buy some ice cream and cookies.
Is it fun sliding on the rainbow?
Did you like the slide?
I liked your story.
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