During a recent to the zoo, A1 was able to feed the giraffes. This is the story that Kyrah wrote.
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A2
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Wow Kyrah, that was a lovely story. I liked how you started your story by describing the day. Was it fun feeding the giraffe? I saw a picture of the giraffe's tongue. It is very long.
6 comments:
Wow Kyrah, that was a lovely story. I liked how you started your story by describing the day. Was it fun feeding the giraffe? I saw a picture of the giraffe's tongue. It is very long.
I like kyrahs story. But she was moving at the last part.
Great story Kyrah. You read it very well.
Kyrah you wrote a very good story, I especially liked the way you started it. You also read it in a clear voice and looked at the camera. Well done!
It was good
It was good
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